defenceless

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 24-Jul-2005 3:46:35

I sit here. Your voice is near. The words flow. I watch your anger grow. I try to help you. I can't. Why? The reason is all the hurtless people hur you, and leave your guilt on my shoulders. I turn into smoldering ash, and I crash.
I crash with all your wait. I hear you cry for my help. How I try and try again. I hear you cry and cry again. I lay here on my bed defenceless. Why am I so defenceless? Because I care about you.
You come to me. I hold you in my arms. I try to comfort you, but you can't hear me. You're not near me, where I want you to be.

Post 2 by zackmack2000 ( extreme killer of the keys) on Sunday, 24-Jul-2005 3:50:16

How emotional Karie!

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Sunday, 24-Jul-2005 9:01:34

very powerful and evocative bravo!